Uncertainty

[bookaddict43]

Title: Uncertainty
Author: Bookaddict
Characters: Jayne, Kaylee
Rating: PG13
Word count: 100
Comments: originally written for firefly100. Prompt: egg

“Jayne,” Kaylee fingered her lumpy forehead. “Will ya look at this for me?”

Jayne peered at the rapidly swelling goose-egg. “Maybe ya should be seein’ the Doc about that.”

Kaylee blushed. After their last fight, she really weren’t keen on seein’ Simon for awhile. It was better for both of them to have some coolin’ down time. “I’m avoidin’ him right now. Couldn’t ya clean it up? I don’t think it’s real serious.”

“I’ll look,” Jayne sighed, gazin’ at her seriously. “But girl - is all this arguin’ and uncomfortableness worth it?”

Kaylee shook her head, “I don’t know anymore.”

Comments

[ladytalon1.livejournal.com]

I should be rejoicing at the Jaylee, but even though I know the Jaylee is going to happen it's still kind of sad :| Which is a weird reaction because you know how I feel about The Silee. *shrugs*

Good drabble, though! *hugs*

[bookaddict43.livejournal.com]

Thank you! *hugs*

It's the power of my writing! *nods* And it is sad that they couldn't make it last...

[danniisupernova.livejournal.com]

This seems like a good preamble. I love the Jayne characterization.

[bookaddict43.livejournal.com]

Thank you - I'm glad you think I got Jayne right *twirls*

[ceslas.livejournal.com]

“I’ll look,” Jayne sighed, gazin’ at her seriously. “But girl - is all this arguin’ and uncomfortableness worth it?”

Jayne being all soft-like is odd and still sweet. He probably nursed a fair amount of goose eggs in his time with a pile of siblings always getting into messes >;0)

[bookaddict43.livejournal.com]

*grins* He's probably had a few goose eggs of his own too :)

[xx-squish-xx.livejournal.com]

Of course it's not worth it!

And of course Jayne can see that. :)

Nice use of the prompt btw.

[bookaddict43.livejournal.com]

I'm glad that Kaylee's seeing it a bit too now. Thank you about the prompt - it was hard to write for...

[lucasharper.livejournal.com]

I just *knew* it was gonna steer towards Jaylee ambiguity! I just knew it! *g*

[bookaddict43.livejournal.com]

You did? I wonder why *chuckles*!

[mercsgoodgirl.livejournal.com]

“I’m avoidin’ him right now." So Kaylee. And I agree - very creative use of the prompt.

[bookaddict43.livejournal.com]

Thank you :) Making the prompts fit is very hard work sometimes. What's worse is I gave this particular prompt!