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bookaddict43 ([personal profile] bookaddict43) wrote2007-01-29 10:46 pm

Hidden

Title: Hidden
Author: Bookaddict
Characters: Jayne, Kaylee, River
Rating: G
Word count: 100
Comments: originally written for [livejournal.com profile] firefly100

Jayne stood unnoticed in the doorway. He only had himself to blame. If he hadn’t been mean, cross-grained and too stupid to talk to her it might be him standin’ beside her grinnin’ like a loon. But Kaylee was happy, that was all that mattered.

“Heart broken,” the crazy girl’s voice was quiet.

“Don’t have a heart girl.”

“It’s hidden,” she nodded. “But functioning.”

“Ifen it’s functionin’ then it ain’t broken,” Jayne growled.

“I could mend it if you’d let me,” River said wistfully to his back, wishing she could summon up the courage to say it to his face.
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[identity profile] ladytalon1.livejournal.com 2007-01-29 09:07 pm (UTC)(link)
Awwwwwwwwwwwww..........!


Very sweet and sniffle worthy.
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[identity profile] bookaddict43.livejournal.com 2007-01-30 11:56 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you! I felt so sorry for River!