Hidden

[bookaddict43]

Title: Hidden
Author: Bookaddict
Characters: Jayne, Kaylee, River
Rating: G
Word count: 100
Comments: originally written for firefly100

Jayne stood unnoticed in the doorway. He only had himself to blame. If he hadn’t been mean, cross-grained and too stupid to talk to her it might be him standin’ beside her grinnin’ like a loon. But Kaylee was happy, that was all that mattered.

“Heart broken,” the crazy girl’s voice was quiet.

“Don’t have a heart girl.”

“It’s hidden,” she nodded. “But functioning.”

“Ifen it’s functionin’ then it ain’t broken,” Jayne growled.

“I could mend it if you’d let me,” River said wistfully to his back, wishing she could summon up the courage to say it to his face.

Comments

[artemis-prime.livejournal.com]

Nice little triangle you've set up here. Will you continue this?

[bookaddict43.livejournal.com]

Glad you like the triangle!

I hadn't thought of a continuation - but everyone seems to want one! So maybe...

[brithistorian.livejournal.com]

Very nice! Sequel? :-D

[mercsgoodgirl.livejournal.com]

Oooo, BH, I LOVE that icon! Can you tell me who made it? Also may I friend you?

[brithistorian.livejournal.com]

Unfortunately, I forgot to make a note of who made the icon or even where I found it, and now I can't remember. Sorry.

As for friending me, go right ahead! :-D {friends you back}

[bookaddict43.livejournal.com]

Thank you! :) A sequel? hmmmmm

[guinny-hamilton.livejournal.com]

*bounces* Awesome!


What if he heard her?

*evil grin*

[bookaddict43.livejournal.com]

You've got me thinking now! *pushes away the bunnies*

[mercsgoodgirl.livejournal.com]

“It’s hidden,” she nodded. “But functioning.”

Very astute, little crazy person.

[bookaddict43.livejournal.com]

The cleverness is still there that's for sure!

[ladytalon1.livejournal.com]

Awwwwwwwwwwwww..........!


Very sweet and sniffle worthy.

[bookaddict43.livejournal.com]

Thank you! I felt so sorry for River!

[angel932.livejournal.com]

Oh, please tell me he heard that! (You, know, being a tracker and all with extra-sharp.....yes, I am rationalizing, why do you ask?)

[bookaddict43.livejournal.com]

I never thought of him hearing her! It's giving me ideas!

[maureen.livejournal.com]

Not big on the Rayne, m'self, and yet I find that I too want Jayne to have heard her. Maybe you could keep this one going?

[bookaddict43.livejournal.com]

Everyone wants to know what's going to happen! I might have to start thinking

[xx-squish-xx.livejournal.com]

Awwww!

I love unrequited love triangles! You should continue this.

[bookaddict43.livejournal.com]

I never expected so many requests for a continuation! But now I have plot bunnies running around in my mind!