Incipient

Aug. 25th, 2006 06:02 pm
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Title: Incipient
Author: Bookaddict
Characters: Jayne/Kaylee
Rating: PG13
Word count: 1051
Comments: [livejournal.com profile] squish_67 sent me a gift in the post and I offered a fic to her prompt in return. Her prompts were : Jayne/Kaylee, water. Hope you like it [livejournal.com profile] squish_67!
Incipient: adj. beginning to come into being or to become apparent

Jayne strode along quickly, headed for the waterhole he’d found yesterday.

Since they were stranded on this rock for a couple of days longer yet, he figured he may as well go fishin’. Catch them some real food – he drooled at the thought.

The water had looked mighty fine to him, clear green and not polluted, he might have a swim too. Jayne enjoyed swimmin’ and never got much of a chance out in the black, he was lookin’ forward to the relaxation and fun, anticipatin’ bein’ away from the ship.

Comin’ into the clearin’ he was disappointed to see the sand beside the waterhole already occupied. When he got a bit closer, he was relieved to see it were only little Kaylee.

“Hey Jayne,” she greeted, tryin’ hopelessly to cover the disappointment written all over her face.

She’d obviously been expectin’ the doctor. His glance swept over her swimsuit covered body, the blanket spread out all careful like on the ground, basket on top, hurt expression on her face; and for once in his life didn’t say what he was thinkin’.

“I’m goin’ fishin’, want to come?”

Kaylee’s face lit up for a moment, “Haven’t been fishin’ since I left home.” Her smile faded as she looked down at her preparations. “Maybe I’d better wait here though.”

“I ain’t goin’ far. Ya should be able to keep an eye out from there.” Jayne was careful not to say anythin’ ‘bout hun dan Simon. The man didn’t know what side his bread was buttered on; fancy leavin’ a willin’ Kaylee out here, waitin’ on him.

“Shiny!” the girl exclaimed. “Can we take turns with the pole?”

********************

“What ya goin’ to do now?” queried Kaylee.

They’d spent the last couple of hours squabblin’ over the pole while fishin’ and catchin’ enough to feed everyone on the boat.

“I’m gonna dangle the fish in the water and go for a swim.” Jayne grinned at her, “I’ve been dyin’ for a swim.”

“Me too, ain’t it lovely seein’ all that water?” They nodded at each other in delight. “I’m comin’ in with ya and when we’re finished; let’s have a picnic.”

“Ya want me to share yer food?” He hadn’t missed her many glances at the picnic area while they were fishin’, the disappointment flickerin’ cross her face every time she didn’t see the Doctor.

“Yep.” Kaylee nodded decisively. Simon clearly wasn’t comin’ and Jayne was here bein’ all friendly. “It’s a lovely day for a picnic and I bought plenty of food.”

“That’s good girl. ‘Cause I’m gonna have a powerful appetite when I get outta the water.”

********************

Jayne stared at Kaylee all glistenin’ from her swim, her water sleek hair plastered to her body, and shaken by a wave of lust, turned away quickly.

She was sorta covered by the swimsuit, but it hugged her figure just right and she were displayin’ a lot more creamy soft skin than he was used to seein’ on her. His man parts and brain were startin’ to take notice of the little girl in a way they hadn’t done before.

Tryin’ to take his mind off Kaylee’s body, Jayne glanced down at the picnic basket she was opening.

“Chicken! Ya got chicken, my favourite.” He took the piece she held out to him and bit into it with gusto. “Ya didn’t cook this on Serenity.”

“Are ya kiddin’?” Kaylee laughed at him. “The moment I took it out of the oven, it’d be gone. I bought it at the market this mornin’.”

“What else ya buy?” He leant forward and rummaged through the basket, “mushrooms, real wine and strawberries. Ya really went all out didn’t ya?”

********************

She’d had a unexpectedly good time today; first the fishin’, swimmin’ and now lunch. She and Jayne had had such fun in the water. Chasin’ and splashin’ each other, floatin’ companionably and divin’ deep. Full to the brim with food now and slightly hazy from wine and exercise, Kaylee wanted to talk.

“Ya do much swimmin’ when ya were a kid?” She asked him.

“A mite,” Jayne was stretched out on the ground, sleepy. “Did ya?”

“We had a creek not far from our place. Not as big as this, but we had some good times there.” Kaylee’s voice was dreamy. “Me and my brothers went there a lot and when I got to be noticin’ boys I used to take them there too, if they were real special we’d go skinny dippin’.”

“Sexin’ too?” Jayne asked, rememberin’ a couple of girls he’d taken swimmin’.

“Sexin’ too.” Kaylee blushed; pink colour flushin’ all over her creamy skin. It made hihim want to see how far the pink went. “I was kinda hopin’ for some of that today.” She half whispered.

“I’d jump ya right now ifen I got any encouragement.”

Startled Kaylee glanced down into Jayne’s blue eyes, surprised by the heat she saw there.

“Don’t gotta worry though. I know it ain’t me yer wantin’.” Till now he hadn’t thought that he was wantin’ her either. But the thought of sexin’ Kaylee was suddenly eatin’ at his brain; it was all kinds of confusin’.

“I think what I’ve been wantin’ ain’t that real.” Kaylee voiced her thoughts out loud, knowin’ he wouldn’t mind listenin’ to her ramble. “Don’t like how it makes me feel.”

“Gonna let it happen again?”

“I don’t think so. Me and Simon don’t seem to be wantin’ the same things.” Kaylee sighed. “And that ain’t good for either of us.”

********************

“Thanks Jayne.” Kaylee smiled at him as they walked back to the ship. “I had a beautiful day.”

“Just went fishin’ and swimmin’ and ate all yer food.” He pointed out gruffly.

“Didn’t leave me out there feelin’ all foolish and sorry,” the girl patted his arm. “And ya listened to me talk. Maybe we can do it again sometime?”

“The fishin’ and eatin’?”

“That and talkin’ and swimmin’,” Kaylee glanced at him sideways, thinkin’ that bein’ with Jayne might be a lot less complicated.

“Skinny dippin’ and sexin’ too?” Jayne grinned at her lecherously and waggled his eyebrows.

“I got some things to sort out and it might take some time, but yeah.” Kaylee brushed her lips across his cheek, “probably skinny dippin’ and sexin’ too.”

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Date: 2006-08-25 08:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jayneswoman.livejournal.com
Very nice! Good writing, [livejournal.com profile] bookaddict43! Love the way you took it real slow. Sometimes it doesn't make sense to have them jumping at each other the first opprtunity. Holding back and delayed gratification kust adds to the pleasure when it finally all comes together...

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Date: 2006-08-26 06:56 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] bookaddict43.livejournal.com
Thank you! Glad you liked the feel of this, just a lazy day thing. I like immediate sexin' of course, but the lead up to it can be good too. *grins*

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Date: 2006-08-25 10:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] meimei42.livejournal.com
“Skinny dippin’ and sexin’ too?” Jayne grinned at her lecherously and waggled his eyebrows.

“I got some things to sort out and it might take some time, but yeah.” Kaylee brushed her lips across his cheek, “probably skinny dippin’ and sexin’ too.”



This was the best woman! Serious. I loved that they didn't just have sex right there because Kaylee obvisouly does have some things that she has to sort out but they had a good time together and that is a good base for the two of them, getting them thinking about each other hehe

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Date: 2006-08-26 06:58 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] bookaddict43.livejournal.com
Thinking about each other Yay! It could lead to all sorts of things....and skinny dipping with either of them, yummmmm.

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Date: 2006-08-25 01:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] maureen.livejournal.com
This was just great! I'd squee but that would be two in a row and I'm not that excited that often. Might hurt myself.

I love how they easily spent the day together and that you allowed Kaylee time for transition...the hints at romance between them were perfect.

Maybe you could write some more of this? Turn it into a longer story? Maybe?

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Date: 2006-08-26 07:01 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] bookaddict43.livejournal.com
lol - can't have you hurting yourself! Their easy day together could lead to lots of things couldn't it? But this was a one-shot for now. Unless you want to continue it?

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Date: 2006-08-26 02:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] maureen.livejournal.com
Oh, I wish I could. I should be doing homework right now even. But really... think about this. It could be the start of a great story arc.

puh-leeeeeeeeeeeeeeeze ?!?!?!?!?!?

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Date: 2006-08-27 01:24 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] bookaddict43.livejournal.com
One day - maybe. But I've still got to finish Recurrent Verse, Them that choose it, Tenderfeet and Resistance. Plus the next chapter of the kitten fic is mine too. Oh and I claimed 3 prompts at ana_grrl's ficathon!! And of course RL keeps getting in the way too - Ick! *stagger*

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Date: 2006-08-25 04:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lusciouspandora.livejournal.com
*waves hand wildly in air* I vote for skinny dippin' and sexin' too! Yes! *gathers self* Ahem...er, I mean...yes, that was very lovely. *g*

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Date: 2006-08-26 07:03 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] bookaddict43.livejournal.com
*grins at your comment* Everybody seems to like that line!Thanks muchly :)

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Date: 2006-08-25 05:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] xx-squish-xx.livejournal.com
That was wonderful, thanks so much! I wondered which direction you'd go with the water prompt. I liked that they were so comfortable with each other and that she's thinking about it (and that he didn't just jump her right off).

Although, that said, I could easily have been happy with the immediate sexin'! I'm so easy to please!

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Date: 2006-08-26 07:05 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] bookaddict43.livejournal.com
Hee! You are easy to please - but I am so happy you liked your prompt. I had fun writing it!

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Date: 2006-08-26 12:14 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] danniisupernova.livejournal.com
People should give you gifts more often. Do you need more nifty icons? Cause I can do that!

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Date: 2006-08-26 07:06 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] bookaddict43.livejournal.com
I love gifts and always need icons! lol! Provide and prompt me - if you want!!??

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