Wiliness

[bookaddict43]

Title: Wiliness
Author: Bookaddict
Characters: Mal/Jayne
Rating: PG13 I think. There’s lots of euphemisms
Word count: 100
Comments: originally written for firefly100, prompt: redux and prompt: move. A continuation from Wiles and Wiley. Thanks to lucasharper for the read-over.

“We gotta move this some place else,” Mal gasped as his man parts got all riled up.

“Ok,” Jayne wrapped his free arm round the Captain’s neck and dragged him bunkwards.

They practically fell down the ladder and somehow Jayne’s fingers had Mal’s suspenders loosened and pants pushed down in nothing flat.

Mal fended off the wandering hands and said sternly. “Just so’s you know. I’m top.”

“Na ah.”

“Ah ha.”

“How ‘bout we take turns?” Jayne tumbled them onto the bed and cunningly used his mouth to continue the argument.

Yep. The man had wiles. “Turns it is,” Mal groaned.

Comments

[evilmaniclaugh.livejournal.com]

It took me hundreds of goes to get this page to load but it was so worth it. I loved it. I hope there's more. :D

[bookaddict43.livejournal.com]

I'm glad you persevered and thank you :) I'm pretty hopeless at the actual sexing, but I will try...

[noctuabunda.livejournal.com]

I'll be in my bunk. :)

[bookaddict43.livejournal.com]

*giggles* Thank you!

[ladytalon1.livejournal.com]

I'd like to see those wiles in action *wink wink*

This was cute, and I loved their "Nuh uh" "Yeah huh" argument :D

[bookaddict43.livejournal.com]

You could write the action *persuades*. The na ah, ah ha thing was the first thing I thought of and then I had to write the rest!!

[mercsgoodgirl.livejournal.com]

Jayne tumbled them onto the bed and cunningly used his mouth to continue the argument.

This may be one of my all-time fave lines from any of your fics!

[bookaddict43.livejournal.com]

It took ages for me to think up that line! *twirls* Thanks for remarking on it :D

[tinadoll.livejournal.com]

Yup Turns it is

LMAO!

[bookaddict43.livejournal.com]

*grins* Turns are always good *agrees*. Glad you liked it!! :D

[bugchicklv.livejournal.com]

YesyesyesyesYES! I can so see these two fighting over who tops. Of course, in my mind, all my slash pairings take turns. It's only fair.

Also, my girl-parts LOVED Jayne tumbled them onto the bed and cunningly used his mouth to continue the argument because I have a feeling that tongue could convince anyone to do ANYTHING.

[bookaddict43.livejournal.com]

*grins at your girl-parts* I think they should take turns too, but those two boys are stubborn :)