Wily?

[bookaddict43]

Title: Wily?
Author: Bookaddict
Characters: Jayne/Mal
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: Firefly and Serenity are the property of Joss Whedon
Word Count: 200
Comments: Originally written for firefly100. Prompt: redux, prompt: shot. For evilmaniclaugh and cmk418. Hope it’s ok :D

Jayne couldn’t figure out why Mal kept staring at him.

He’d been so gorramn respectable lately it was unsettling.

He hadn’t shot anybody Mal hadn’t wanted shot, hadn’t said one wrong thing at the dinner table or even upset the Doc lately – much. He’d only leered at ‘Nara a couple of times, didn’t get pinched for fighting last time they were planetside and hadn’t fought with crazy for a whole day.

“So what’d I do?” he growled at the Captain who stared harder and growled back.

“Stop it.”

“Stop what?” Jayne was bewildered.

“Using wiles.”

“I ain’t using wiles,” Jayne said defensively. “Am I?”

“You are,” Mal leaned forward and pointed accusingly. “Stop it.”

“Why would I be using…?” Jayne’s voice trailed off and he looked – really looked, into the Captain’s eyes.

The man might be staring, growling and accusing, but something else was there. Something that appeared to be…lust?

Jayne was plenty familiar with lust. His gaze fell lower and he leered at the imminent bulge in Mal’s pants. Yep. That was lust for sure.

“Maybe I do got some wiles,” he reached for and, rubbed the bulge teasingly.

“Yeah maybe,” Mal groaned, and grasped at a bulge himself.

Comments

[cmk418]

Thank you for writing this. Excellent work. “Maybe I do got some wiles" - love that line and I can totally hear Jayne saying it.

[bookaddict43.livejournal.com]

I enjoyed writing this! You gave me some good bunnies :D Thanks for pointing out the line you liked - I always like to know what works...

[mercsgoodgirl.livejournal.com]

You has giv me the giggles.

[bookaddict43.livejournal.com]

*grins* and giggles with you :DD

[romanceguru.livejournal.com]

*g*

I like that Jayne easily recognizes the lust in Mal's eyes; that alone speaks volumes. : )

[bookaddict43.livejournal.com]

I like that Jayne easily recognizes the lust in Mal's eyes; that alone speaks volumes It does indeed!! The man is mighty knowing about such things :D

[noctuabunda.livejournal.com]

Jayne was plenty familiar with lust.
Heh. I can imagine that.
Great sequel! Is there gonna be a series?

[bookaddict43.livejournal.com]

Jayne and lust just sort of go together I think. I'm not sure about the series, but I'm glad you liked it :)

[ladytalon1.livejournal.com]

Love leering Jayne and watchful Mal - now there must be The Sex!

Maybe he's got some of them wiles after all ;)

[bookaddict43.livejournal.com]

Jayne's wiles are all unconcious, but he weilds them well. You know me and the writing of the sex! It just doesn't happen that often :)

[tinadoll.livejournal.com]

Aw that was cute! Jayne using wiles *giggles*

[bookaddict43.livejournal.com]

*grins at you* Thanks muchly :)

[ru-salki99.livejournal.com]

Yay! *claps hands*

[bookaddict43.livejournal.com]

Thank you! *beams*

[evilmaniclaugh.livejournal.com]

Jayne was plenty familiar with lust. His gaze fell lower and he leered at the imminent bulge in Mal’s pants. Yep. That was lust for sure.

“Maybe I do got some wiles,” he reached for and, rubbed the bulge teasingly.

PERFECT!

I adore the way you write Jayne. I'd love to read more. :)

XXXX

[bookaddict43.livejournal.com]

You thought it was perfect and like how I write Jayne? *hugs you and twirls*

Jayne's my favourite so I've written lots and hope to write more. Your encouragement helps! :)

From my previous ones, you might like Letters (http://bookaddict43.livejournal.com/49691.html#cutid1), a series of letters between Jayne and his Ma. It does sort of go on and on though :D