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bookaddict43 ([personal profile] bookaddict43) wrote2007-10-05 10:46 pm
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Askew

Title: Askew
Author: Bookaddict
Characters: River, Jayne, Crew
Disclaimer: Firefly and all it’s characters are the property of Joss Whedon.
Rating: PG13
Comment: Total fluff written for the redux at [livejournal.com profile] ff_friday. Prompt #156 Feathers

When she could hear it, which wasn’t often, River liked Jayne’s mind. Although they were not always nice, his thoughts were clear and uncluttered. With Jayne currently unconscious, his defences down, she loitered outside the infirmary, a particular goal in mind.

Simon had told her of Jayne’s angelic visions and she wished to see them for herself. Angels and their legends had always fascinated her. The thought that the big, tough mercenary saw the creatures in his mind intrigued her and she couldn’t resist peeking.

Sure enough, in the dreamlike haze which was permeating Jayne’s mind, all the female crew were present.

Displaying anatomically correct and very naked girl parts, Inara floated by, wings moving languidly. Zoë’s progress was steady and purposeful. Kaylee skimmed through the air merrily. She hadn’t expected to be included in the group, but there she was. Peeping round a corner, hair tangled, wings atilt and feathers askew.

River hugged herself in delight.

[identity profile] budclare.livejournal.com 2007-10-05 01:26 pm (UTC)(link)
*giggles* That's so disturbing, and yet cute. :)
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[identity profile] bookaddict43.livejournal.com 2007-10-06 11:37 am (UTC)(link)
I just figured if Jayne saw angels - they'd have to be naked!! Thank you :)

[identity profile] danniisupernova.livejournal.com 2007-10-05 02:26 pm (UTC)(link)
Omg. I love this! I don't even ship River/Jayne. I just really like this. I think it's a good moment for River, kind of realizing that she's sexually attractive.
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[identity profile] ladytalon1.livejournal.com 2007-10-05 03:51 pm (UTC)(link)
Amen.
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[identity profile] bookaddict43.livejournal.com 2007-10-06 11:42 am (UTC)(link)
I think it's a good moment for River, kind of realizing that she's sexually attractive. Just what I was aiming for! That and the realisation that Jayne includes her in the group as well :)

[identity profile] xx-squish-xx.livejournal.com 2007-10-05 02:54 pm (UTC)(link)
Haha, see now, that's Jayne! Everybody's nekkid. :)

Of course, if Zoe ever found out she'd hurt him.

But he'd like that too. ;)
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[identity profile] bookaddict43.livejournal.com 2007-10-06 11:38 am (UTC)(link)
*grins* Thanks for the advice! I like this version much better...And yes Jayne would like the hurting :)

[identity profile] doodlebug-03.livejournal.com 2007-10-05 05:01 pm (UTC)(link)
I love it! I love the way that it shows how he views each of them, and lets River know that he 'does' think of her, too.
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[identity profile] bookaddict43.livejournal.com 2007-10-06 11:44 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you! Yep *nods*. Even though they're all naked, they all have individual traits, River too. Trust Jayne to dream the naked :D

[identity profile] theneis.livejournal.com 2007-10-06 12:18 am (UTC)(link)
AWWW...that's so cute.
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[identity profile] bookaddict43.livejournal.com 2007-10-06 11:39 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you! :D

[identity profile] romanceguru.livejournal.com 2007-10-06 06:15 pm (UTC)(link)
I love how River was the messy angel and she's ok with that. : )

[identity profile] steplianna.livejournal.com 2008-02-15 08:37 pm (UTC)(link)
awwww...she was just happy to be included, just as she was!