Wow, that was really beautiful. So sad, but also incredibly beautifully written. I love the imagery, and I think it's amazing how you wrote Jayne, he's so in-character but at the same time it feels like seeing a whole other side to him. Very nicely done.
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Date: 2007-08-08 01:36 pm (UTC)