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bookaddict43 ([personal profile] bookaddict43) wrote2006-08-04 01:58 pm
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Resistance : Scold

Series title: Resistance
Title: Scold
Prompt #41 Friend
Author: Bookaddict
Characters: Jayne/Kaylee, River
Rating: PG
Comments: Originally written for [livejournal.com profile] ficlets100 Previous chapters here, Prompt table here

He wouldn’t agree, wouldn’t help her. Just growled, walked off and wouldn’t look back.

Kaylee wanted him to look back and notice her, maybe smile. She longed for everything to be the way it used to be.

She hadn’t realised Jayne had been hurt, that people were mean to him. “It isn’t true – is it?”

“Yes.” River was stern. “The treatment has been bad.”

“By the others?”

“By you, they know no better.”

“I didn’t know.”

“Yes you did.” Her friend was less cryptic than usual. “You didn’t want to see. Jayne did what you wanted, as always. It’s selfish.”

[identity profile] a-phoenixdragon.livejournal.com 2006-08-04 05:18 am (UTC)(link)
Damn! And the one-two punch from the 'crazy' chick!!

I'm just loving this!! I'm too hooked!!

*Adores you...*
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[identity profile] bookaddict43.livejournal.com 2006-08-04 06:25 am (UTC)(link)
Wasn't River cool? Glad you're hooked and loving it! *hugs*

[identity profile] xx-squish-xx.livejournal.com 2006-08-04 06:03 am (UTC)(link)
Oh my goodness, this doesn't sound like it's going to get worked out anytime soon! You'd better write faster so I can get to the shiny resolution!
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[identity profile] bookaddict43.livejournal.com 2006-08-04 06:28 am (UTC)(link)
Well you know what they say - *cue cliche* the course of true love never runs smooth.

I'll try *laces up running shoes* but the muse is sometimes verrrry fickle!

[identity profile] meimei42.livejournal.com 2006-08-05 01:28 am (UTC)(link)
Oh man, oh man. I want need more! This is so heartbreakingly wonderful. Good job woman!
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[identity profile] bookaddict43.livejournal.com 2006-08-05 11:06 am (UTC)(link)
It's all due to you *points at you*. You're asking for more of my first one, spurred me on. So I'm happy you need more....I shall try to supply it!!

[identity profile] meimei42.livejournal.com 2006-08-05 12:45 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh thank you, I love it when folks supply me with my much needed crack fic.