Wow. That is both beautiful and heartbreaking. I re-read "Sparks" and it's interesting to see the differences in the two perspectives and that you keep Simon's mindset so true to where he was at that point (no regrets of leaving Serenity like River had). It also puts a different spin on his emotions when the rescue takes place. Very well done and I'm glad you followed up the initial post with this one.
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Date: 2007-11-08 02:25 pm (UTC)