Ma Cobb knows her son so well, I loved this: Whoever heard of such a thing playing with your innards don’t you ever think of it. Of course she'd know that for just a split second there, he was thinking about it!
Love how you show that Jayne really does notice things on the ship and how worried he is over his mother and Mattie. I can't wait to read more (are you going to incorporate the comic book info?).
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Ma Cobb knows her son so well, I loved this:
Whoever heard of such a thing playing with your innards don’t you ever think of it. Of course she'd know that for just a split second there, he was thinking about it!
Love how you show that Jayne really does notice things on the ship and how worried he is over his mother and Mattie. I can't wait to read more (are you going to incorporate the comic book info?).