i have seen you posting here and there, in the communities, and i just couldn't resist reading some of your stuff. i have to say, this is a fantastic little piece! i love jayne not understanding why kaylee wanted him, and my heart melted when they cuddled.

you said above that this was a first for trying first person, and i have to say, this was fantastically well-written! i can't wait to see how much you've even grown since this one! well done!

*slinks off to read more of your fics*